Haiku Season

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Patterns in the clouds

Like palm imprints on smooth dough

Recorded destiny…

Narbada River

Warble of the brook

Resonates within the soul

God’s quiet tuning fork

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Birds making melody

Passionate life surging anew

Joyous dawn, welcome…!

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Vibrant evening hush,

Wafting wood smoke aromatic

Oh blessed home fires…!

 

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Note: Pictures mine

4 thoughts on “Haiku Season

    1. Dagny Post author

      Thanks a lot Hass…. glad you liked the pics…:)

      My family is fine… I hope you and your family are good. 😀

      Thanks for the visit…

      Dagny

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  1. bharathi

    Dagny, my comment in poetical form 😉 no lol’ing pls!

    watching the changes
    happen around me
    from dawn to dusk
    feeling within
    the absence of noise.
    so serene
    so melodious 😉
    ———
    hold my hand
    help me to write
    a better poem. 😀

    lovely both your poetry and the pictures!
    love
    bharathi

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    1. Serenely Rapt Post author

      Bharathi,

      I have to thank Dr Madhvi for this set of Haikus. It was she who insisted that I write a set. I was sure I wouldn’t be able to- at all. I ended up surprising myself. 🙂

      You are writing well without anyone’s help. Just keep writing… let the thoughts pour out of you. You can tweak the poem once you’ve got the thought down. One thing I know for sure. If a poetry challenged nut like me can write poems… anyone can. So go ahead…

      Love and hugs…
      Dagny

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