The woman stood alone watching the waterfall raptly.
She wrapper her arms around her body and shivered delicately. The spray from the waterfall wafted over her in a thin mist, enveloping her intimately. She ran her palms over her arms, rubbing away the goose bumps. A fresh waft and another set of goose bumps began their journey down her body. She could even feel her scalp prickling up.
A set of bizarre coincidences had led her to an abandoned Government Rest House deep in a forgotten nook of the Sahyadri mountains. A relic of the Raj, the rest house boasted one VERY old caretaker and his equally ancient wife. They had fallen over themselves when she had expressed a tentative desire to stay there for a day. One day had already stretched to a week and was likely to stretch even more. She had no idea when she’d be able to drag herself away from the deep tranquility that laid its cool hand upon her scorched soul. It didn’t look like it would be soon. She shrugged her fragile shoulders in impatient dismissal.
Rohit will have to wait until she was good and ready to go back to work and start work on the new project. As for his advances on her person, she will deal with them. In her tawny brown eyes, grey appeared like the spokes of a wheel as they smoldered in annoyed remembrance. Her naturally red fluid lips curled in derision as she polished some of the phrases she intended to say to him. The pearly fair cheeks glowed with indignant color. In another instant, like a flash of lightening, her eyes lost their brooding look and glinted in glee. Yes, she will let him have it across his wind-pipe. He had clung to her like a limpet and needed to be stepped on and ground to pulp.
Last week when she had reached here, the landscape had been dry, gasping with a deep summer thirst. From the very first walk she had wandered off on, she felt a strange resonance with the land. The trail was dusty and the leaves rustled, recording their protest in hoarse whispers. The mountains were dry, bereft and depleted. They looked as if their capacity for flaunting their green had been burned away in the crucible of the valley. The vegetation had looked scorched in the pitiless summer heat. The ground exhaled putrid warm breath that crept up her legs all the way up to her nose. She felt as is she sat in a sauna containing a barrel of rotting leaves.
The lofty mountains had silently taken her in their arms and she had slumped in relief, glad to let go. She had never belonged in the city that was her home. Her small flat had never felt like a place to stay and grow roots. It was a temporary perch from which to take flight. From her first solitary ramble, she had belonged here, in this new and unfamiliar wilderness. The fact had ceased to surprise her.
There had been no waterfall a week ago when she came here first. Just a pool of scummy green water at the base of what had become a waterfall now. She had seen water marks on the dry rocks and knew there was a season in the life of those mountains when water flowed with prodigal abundance. The landscape waited for that season, thirsting for rain and life.
Three days after her arrival, monsoon had burst upon the valley in all its glorious and frightening majesty. She had never, EVER felt the rain as she felt it here. The experience defied description. In the city the rain was always a bother, an unwelcome intruder, resentfully dealt with. The residents struggled fiercely and silently to defeat the force, defying it to disrupt their lives. The force retaliated aggressively. It overran gutters and the filth of an over crowded city choked the lungs of her residence in malevolent revenge.
In these ancient mountains, rain was a succor. It was eagerly anticipated, longingly desired. When it came, it was gulped in with appreciation to quench a parched thirst which had become all but unbearable through the long months of summer. The valley swayed and danced with delight. The joy of a prodigal’s return was accorded to the truant rain swollen clouds. Nature was primed for growth, pregnant with the seed of unborn greatness in her, geared to let new life burst forth.
The woman stood looking at the waterfall fed by the turbid reddish-brown rain. Her right arm was raised to grasp a low branch of the tree above her. In the half an hour she had stood there, dark clouds had gathered overhead blocking out the mid-day sun. It was barely four in the afternoon but it looked as if dusk had already fallen. She knew she should go, it was going to rain heavily and she was almost two kilometers away from the rest house. Once the clouds burst, she would find it very difficult to find footholds on paths slippery with mud and flowing with impromptu rivulets.
She stood rooted to the spot. Her limbs refused to budge. She stood there mesmerized, the tree above her glistening with the promise of rain. One drop condensed on the leaves above her and dropped on her head. Just one drop. She should have been unaware of it. But she felt it running down the parting of her hair, like benediction. It emerged out of her hairline and ran down her forehead and her nose. It stopped there, at the end of her nose, trembling for a few interminable moments. Then it dropped off, having made its point, having possessed her. She was suddenly overwhelmed with an emotion too poignant to name in words, even in the breathless silence of her own heart. Her tawny brown eyes filled up with an unspoken longing. They overflowed, spilling what could not be contained. In unerring sympathetic tandem, it began to rain.
She was drenched. The flood welled up from deep within her, adding to the rain without.
Her face buried in the crook of her arm holding the branch above, hanging on to it for support, shoulders shaking violently, she let herself drown in the wild tempest. There were no words in her mind, no discernible sorrow in her heart. Her dry, depleted heart filled up and ran over. It seemed as if the long years of pitiless summer were finally over for her. Her soul drank deeply of the floods released within her. The mountains stood in respectful, aloof empathy silently bearing witness to her cleansing. She surrendered her unnamed sorrows to their stoic keeping, freed of her burdens at last.
As the tempest within her subsided having vent its force, the rain too slackened to a thin icy drizzle. The rain water threw itself impetuously off the mountain slope into the valley below. She turned to look up at the path she had to climb to return to the rest house. There, a few meters away from where she was, stood a man under another tree. He stood silently, in an attitude of patient waiting, looking directly at her. He was drenched too and stood with his arms crossed. She had never seen him before. In the instant of her silent inner gasp, the moment was completed for her. It was like a part of her expected him to be there, standing exactly as he was standing, looking at her exactly as he was looking. She held his glance and began to move towards him.
She had never believed in coincidences- bizarre or otherwise.
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Pics mine.
This is simply superb Dagny!! what an eloquent narrative style you have!! what a catchy description of water majestically streaming down the waterfall amidst lush green surroundings and monsoon rain brewing up and all!! wow!! let me say this! 🙂 you literally carried me and put me down there to see them all! 🙂
you rock when it comes to writing. your mastery of language is ..what could i say!! quite astounding!! ..excellent!! i wish i could write like you! :((
thoroughly enjoyed it.
bharathi
btw: both the woman and the man, completely drenched in monsoon rain now…surely must’ve danced to the tune of ” Roop Tera Mastana” song once in the rest house!! hmm?? oops! 😀
Bharathi,
I think I should mail you a few of my earlier pieces. Believe me when I tell you, they were gawd-awful. If someone read them aloud in my presence, I swear I’d dig my own grave with my bare hands and slip into eternal sleep. They. Were. BAD.
Though there is loads of scope for improvement, now I write much better… even good. This transition happened in four years. I read other people, and I learned. I wonder now why I didn’t learn from novelists and authors of classics that I have been tanking up on all my life. To my utter surprise, I learned how to write better from bloggers… not from established authors. Isn’t that so funny..? That is why I will always have a soft spot for Sulekha. I met stalwarts like Dimwit, Avinashjee and Nargis Natrajan there. I read Supriad and Promilla. I read Jaijui, Bina and Mrs Muffet. Navneet kumar Bakshi and Newneoentities and PGR Nair… awesome. Keshav, Wiskyd and Sevangli are awesome humorists. I became a sponge. I read… and I learned. Who stops you from doing the same…? And it wont even take you four years… for you are far better than I was when I began. Moreover, you have me to assist you if you like. 😀
Love and cheers girl… 😀
Dagny
PS: Oops is right. Now you know why the story had to end where it ended…? 🙂 🙂
Wow! I don’t know what to say in my comment. I am still taking it all in…your words sort of create a longing in the reader’s heart, a yearning for experiencing such a rain, rain that cleanses both the outside and the inside. Beautiful, Dagny! Very beautiful.
Thank you Beloo! I’m absolutely delighted by your comment. I’m so pleased you liked the story. What a lovely feeling you’ve given me. Hugs!