One
Patterns in the clouds
Like palm imprints on smooth dough
Recorded destiny…
Two
Warble of the brook
Resonates within the soul
God’s quiet tuning fork
Three
Birds making melody
Passionate life surging anew
Joyous dawn, welcome…!
Four
Vibrant evening hush,
Wafting wood smoke aromatic
Oh, blessed home fires!
THE ABOVE PHOTOGRAPHS ARE GREAT DAGNY – LIKE THEM – EXCELLENT – BEST REGARDS TO YOU AND THE FAMILY.
Thanks a lot Hass…. glad you liked the pics…:)
My family is fine… I hope you and your family are good. 😀
Thanks for the visit…
Dagny
Dagny, my comment in poetical form 😉 no lol’ing pls!
watching the changes
happen around me
from dawn to dusk
feeling within
the absence of noise.
so serene
so melodious 😉
———
hold my hand
help me to write
a better poem. 😀
lovely both your poetry and the pictures!
love
bharathi
Bharathi,
I have to thank Dr Madhvi for this set of Haikus. It was she who insisted that I write a set. I was sure I wouldn’t be able to- at all. I ended up surprising myself. 🙂
You are writing well without anyone’s help. Just keep writing… let the thoughts pour out of you. You can tweak the poem once you’ve got the thought down. One thing I know for sure. If a poetry challenged nut like me can write poems… anyone can. So go ahead…
Love and hugs…
Dagny